3D Notebook

Study: Ryu (BoF III): II

I tried another version with a much lower voxel resolution.


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  • Size +level of detail much better than last attempt (cute rather than creepy)
  • More scene objects make composition nice


  • Size a bit too small; character can’t even really have eyes
    • (but i am glad i tried a much smaller size to start!)
  • Color palette a bit weird; pastel-y / washed
  • Scales off; trees should be much bigger
  • Fence too prominent — maybe further back and dimmer
  • More details would liven things up; apples, hints of animals / other chars, some terrain, …